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Saturday , June 20 , 2009
warmness is luxury
Posted by 123456 , Reader : 720 , 23:35:51  
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Of all the things I’ve believed in
I just want to get it over with
Tears form behind my eyes, but I do not cry
Counting the days that pass me by
　　
I’ve been searching deep down in my soul
Words that I’m hearing are starting to get old
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew
You were the one I loved
The one thing that I tried to hold on to
　　

I still get lost in your eyes
And it seems that I can’t live a day without you
Closing my eyes and you chase my thoughts away
To a place where I am blinded by the light
But it’s not right
And it hurts to want everything and nothing at the same time
I want what’s yours and I want what’s mine
I want you
But I’m not giving in this time

 

When　two　people　are　in　love,　they　are　eager　to　have　more　sweet　kisses.　 But why　they　are　in　quarrel,　they　are　hurting　each　other　by　the　mouths　that　once used　for　kissing?

--because the feeling has gone, has gone…

 

My dear, to　live　in　a　world　without　you　is　more　painful　than　any　punishment.　Do　you　know　that　no　one　can　replace　you　in　my　heart?　You are lucky, because you can choose to like me or dislike me, but I only have to choose from loving you or loving you more. Love　you,　think　of　you,　love　you　secretly,　eagerly　love　you,　wait, feel　disappointed,　try　hard,　lose,　and　feel　sad,　go　apart,　and recall. All　of　these　are　for　sake　of　you, and　I　will　never　regret　for it.

 

I guess that this is where we’ve come to. When I feel hurt and my tears are going to drop, I will just look up and have a look at the sky once belongs to us. I will hide my storm-like love in my heart just not to give you any pressure. If　you　leave　me,　please　don't　comfort　me　because　each　sewing　has　to　meet stinging pain...

 

Warmness　is　luxury—which　is　reflected　by　deep　cold　and　hurt...

sleepless at night!

 

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comment 11
noonin date : 23/06/2009 time : 19.18
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Kipling is interesting.
His reflection can be seen in some Nation bloggers .
comment 10
Alien date : 23/06/2009 time : 01.25
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The first peom I ever had to learn was when I was in the first grade. I still remember it. Our British compatriots can join in any time they like....

"Listen my children and you shall hear
of the midnight ride of Paul Revere
On the 18th of April in '75
Hardly a man is now alive
who remembers that famous day and year

He said to his friends if the British march
By land or sea from the town to-night,
Hang a lantern aloft in the belfry arch
Of the North Church tower as a signal light, --
One, if by land, and two, if by sea;
And I on the opposite shore will be,
Ready to ride and spread the alarm
Through every Middlesex village and farm,
For the country folk to be up and to arm."

There's more to it but this is all we had to learn. I don't know why but this poem has never left my brain. The other one that I think is the best poem ever written was "IF" by Rudyard Kipling. I never had to learn it but it was on a card I received from my grandmother when I made my Confirmation. I still love that poem even today.
comment 9
expresso date : 22/06/2009 time : 23.40
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peacefulness, c5, thanks.

In my primary and secondary education, I was made to read and recite many Chinese poems. There are only few I can remember. But I say some are really good and have embedded in my mind till this day.

Anyway, I want to post this poem in Chinese which I have modified one of Li Bei's (李白). I think it's relevant to her case. If 123456 would care to translate using her English skill, it would be nice. Here it is:

君不見黄河之水天上來, 奔流到海不復回?
君不見高堂明鏡悲白髪, 朝如青絲暮成雪?
人逢不意莫流恋, 莫使時光返倒流
天生我材必有用, 柔情散盡還復來!
comment 8
expresso date : 22/06/2009 time : 23.31
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123456, there was a time when you wrote a poem-like entry, people worried that you might commit suicide. You see how sentimental and caring people are? I didn't then because I'm pretty good in reading character in the way they write.

Having said that, I think you should ask some bloggers here to critique, people like: catch22, noonin, Ian, Max, lonewolf, lurker, gg, netapit, dryshrimp stalingrad, panya, etc.

You can forget about happyjack and me. happyjack may be good for rap and hip-hop. I am totally useless in anything except having been married for 40 years!
comment 7
maverick263 date : 22/06/2009 time : 21.56

What hurts you, blesses you.
Darkness is your candle.
Your boundaries are your quest.

I can explain this, but it would break
the glass cover on your heart,
and there's no fixing that.
--Rumi
comment 6
GGrass date : 22/06/2009 time : 12.22
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Sorry for being insensitive, but who died?

If she's practicing her poetry skill, she's done very well. From a foreign student from China to a suffering poet... Well done.

Her words are very powerful, meaning, the poem strongly affects the mood of the readers.

After reading the poem, the readers run the risk of hanging themselves. The poems are THAT depressing.

If there was a contest for 'Most Depressing Poem', she will get gold medal for sure.

As a fellow blogger, I have no more comments on her writings, except that I'm anxious to see how her writing changes once she has a new boyfriend.
comment 5
peacefulness date : 21/06/2009 time : 11.55
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expresso---poem from the 红楼梦葬花吟 love in the red chamber....

http://www.51wma.com/sort/4_2226_33240.html
comment 4
stalingrad date : 21/06/2009 time : 08.56
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Alien 1: I agree. Also, think that you have a limited number of days left on this earth, and need to do so many things to improve your well being and that of others (family, society, next generation, etc.), while you have the strength and energy. Then, any depression and dark feelings will be gone as you'd simply have no time for them.
comment 3
Alien date : 21/06/2009 time : 04.07
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Here's an American poem for her (I just made it up)

Don't know why I'm sad, I'm down in the pits

It can't be my face, I do not have zits

I do get my sleep and plenty of rest

I do not know why I'm always depressed

I went to the doctor, said what do you think

I don't drown my troubles with alcohol drink

He said I have something so you won't feel ill

So three times a day take this one little pill

So now I can grow and I will know when

I'll change my name to 8, 9 and 10!
comment 2
expresso date : 21/06/2009 time : 01.46
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Alien, 123456 is practicing to become a poet.

I wonder how much she knows about Chinese poems.

123456, can you post some Chinese poems?
comment 1
Alien date : 21/06/2009 time : 00.50
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123456 - Are you in a permanent melancholy state?
They have pills you can take. Try to cheer up (even if it's with chemical asistance) and move on with your life. Life sucks being so sad all of the time. Be proactive! Do something to improve your mental health!
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